Hi All,
I thought this would be a good way to write all of our comments and keep them in one place. Once people from the board have had a chance to write their piece of info for our "brief" description that differentiates us from other groups, Sharon can do her magic so people take notice.
Sound good?
Here is what you do:
1. Save this url (the letters above that start with http://) to your favorites so you can go back to it and view the updates. To do this you just click on the 'Favorites' button below the url and scroll down to 'Save as Favorite.' Next time you go back to your favorites button, find beautyindustrywest.blogspot.com and click on it.
2. Read what I have written below with the input of Sharon, Angie and myself.
3. Look at the next entry to see the additions that Irena suggested...
4. Under the last post, click on the button for "comment" and include your input.
5. Take what you like from previous text (you can 'cut and paste' text if you like) and add your suggestions into the actual text.
6. Last, you save your comments and wait for the next person to do the same.
I will use the edited version that includes Irena's comments for now until we get a finished product.
Let me know if you have any questions.
Linda 626-405-0424
Original Text from Linda, Sharon, Angie:
Beauty Industry West educates and provides resources for companies and entrepreneurs who want to develop their own personal care and beauty brand.
From product development to packaging and design to sales and marketing we help you get your product launched. If you want to bring a beauty or personal care product to market Beauty Industry West is your #1 resource.
Text from Irena with her recommendations made in blue:
Beauty Industry West is the organization for the manufacturing and supply side of the beauty industry. (How about adding marketing and distribution?) BIW presents the latest trends in personal care and beauty and provides a platform for networking with peers, clients and suppliers.
We educate and provide resources for companies and entrepreneurs who want to develop their own personal care and beauty brand. From raw ingredients to product development, packaging and design to contract manufacturing, marketing and sales, we help you get your product developed, manufactured and distributed.
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1 comment:
It looks good.
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